But he’s not a flea, and dogs notoriously hate baths.
It’s a good pun. In fact it’s a great pun (seriously, it’s everything a silly pun should be… in particular…. silly). But it needs some work in staging. I’m not buying *this* staging. But another situation may be out there.
I guess comic dogs hate baths, but I had a dog that (seemed to) enjoy his bath. Never protested and sat patiently for it. I read the action as Grimm enjoying being rid of the fleas, and it didn’t seem jarring to me.
No, but Peterson is writing this and he’s beginning to lose it. It’s a pun on flea=free. That’s the intent, and that’s what the cartoonist thought was enough. That you see enough to get that it simply doesn’t work doesn’t mean *you* don’t get it; it means the cartoonist failed to *put* it.
He’s free of fleas, anyway.
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Nobody is confused. Peters is simply indulging in a gratuitously silly pun, and Grimm is enjoying the chance to overplay it.
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It leaves me a bit cringey
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But he’s not a flea, and dogs notoriously hate baths.
It’s a good pun. In fact it’s a great pun (seriously, it’s everything a silly pun should be… in particular…. silly). But it needs some work in staging. I’m not buying *this* staging. But another situation may be out there.
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I think woozy has it. Good idea but bad execution.
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I guess comic dogs hate baths, but I had a dog that (seemed to) enjoy his bath. Never protested and sat patiently for it. I read the action as Grimm enjoying being rid of the fleas, and it didn’t seem jarring to me.
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But he isn’t saying “I’m flea-free.”
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“But he isn’t saying “I’m flea-free.””
No, but Peterson is writing this and he’s beginning to lose it. It’s a pun on flea=free. That’s the intent, and that’s what the cartoonist thought was enough. That you see enough to get that it simply doesn’t work doesn’t mean *you* don’t get it; it means the cartoonist failed to *put* it.
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Yep..what Kilby said.
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Another traditional flea pun:
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Then there’s three one where “Pearls Before Swine” did a take on it:
Pig receives an offer for a free atlas, which he mispronounces as “at-LASS.”
Needless to say, the cartoon ends with the cartoonist (Stephan Pastis) about to be beaten with a baseball bat.
I couldn’t find the link to the original strip, but I did find an animated version:
m.youtube.com/watch?v=FbKdUK1PHo8
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@ J-L – That PBS first appeared on 15-Jun-2008:
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Thanks, Kilby! How’d you find the date?
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